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Star vs the forces of Mewni Chapter 1: The Escape
Pain. All she knew was pain. That was all she had felt all her life. Pain, Torment, Torture, Endless and exhausting tests. Though there were some flashes of a past life that was filled happiness, joy, laughter… Friends... But those days were long sense over for her, she couldn’t even tell if they were real or just some twisted thoughts that they put in her head to mess with her.
She was sick of it all, but there was nothing she could do about it. All around her was darkness. Floating in an endless void. It was dreadfully boring, but that was the least of her concerns, for waking up always resulted in pain.
Suddenly she feels a disturbance. It sounded like footsteps, but they didn’t sound like the footsteps that she would usually hear. They sounded urgent. She awakes from her slumber, barely opening her eyes, floating in a green liquid that she was so very used to. Outside of her large cylinder container she could barely make out 3 figures running towards her. She coul
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Pain. All she knew was pain. That was all she had felt all her life. Pain, Torment, Torture, Endless and exhausting tests. Though there were some flashes of a past life that was filled happiness, joy, laughter… Friends... But those days were long sense over for her, she couldn’t even tell if they were real or just some twisted thoughts that they put in her head to mess with her.

She was sick of it all, but there was nothing she could do about it. All around her was darkness. Floating in an endless void. It was dreadfully boring, but that was the least of her concerns, for waking up always resulted in pain.

Suddenly she feels a disturbance. It sounded like footsteps, but they didn’t sound like the footsteps that she would usually hear. They sounded urgent. She awakes from her slumber, barely opening her eyes, floating in a green liquid that she was so very used to. Outside of her large cylinder container she could barely make out 3 figures running towards her. She could hear what they wear saying, if not muffled a bit though the glass and the liquid.

“Come on! We got to hurry! They’ll find us any minute!” Yelled what sounded like a girl’s voice, not one she would recognize from any of the scientists.

“We’re hurrying as fast we can! We got to try to free as many of these prisoners as possible!” Said a deep male voice with an accent she did not recognize. Prisoners? She’s never heard of that word before.

“Here’s one with a prisoner inside! Should we get her out?” Says a lighter pitch male voice compared to the other one. As they get closer she can start to make out what they look like. One is a girl with bronze skin and long blue hair that goes all the way done to her feet. She seems to be wearing a pink and light blue striped shirt and black shorts.

The other two are creatures that she doesn’t recognize. One was a big and roundish green skinned man with a dark green tunic. The other male is what appears to be a man with a beak and winged arms. He appears to be wearing a tank top and blue jeans.

“Woah… She looks really mutated… Are you sure we should let HER out? She looks dangerous…” Said the girl. “Of course! No one deserves to be in a place like this!” Said the Big green man.
Who are these people? Who do they think they are? Are they going to hurt me? All these thoughts were flowing though her head as she watched these strangers talking

Loud clicking can be heard as the big green man pressing down square things in front of her container. Suddenly there is a loud beeping sound with red flashing lights. “Dammit! This one is impossible to crack!” The big green man yelled in frustration.

“Not for me!” said the girl as she pulls out a stick with a long flat shinny piece of sharp metal on it. She then swings the thing at the glass, easily shattering it.

The girl along with the liquid fall out onto the floor in front of them. She has blond hair, blue rugged rags for cloths, 6 arms, a long lizard like tail, small bug like wings and 2 long red horns. Two of her arms have odd ‘hands’, one being a lobster claw while the other being a spike ball. On her upper two hands there are purple star shaped crystals attached to her palms
The room around them was like a large hall way, with large containers filled with green liquid like hers. A lot of them were empty for whatever reason but there were a few others that appeared to have other people or creatures inside.

“Woah! Are you-“ The bird man said walking over only to be cut off as the girl jumps up and hisses at him, glaring at him with yellow pupils and cat like irises. “Woah Woah! Calm down! We’re here to help you!” The blue haired girl she said as she steadily walks over, Raising her hands up mid-way calmly.

The blond girl blinks. “H-Help… Me?” The girl asks confused, as if she didn’t know the meaning of the word. “Poor girl… she must have been in here for long… and judging by the age she looks I would go as far as saying before the war…” The big green man said, looking both shocked and fascinated.

The blue haired girl rolls her eyes at the big green man. “Yes, we are here to help you, Now let’s go!” She said as she grabs the blond’s hand. The blond yelps. “Stop! Who you are?! Where me go?! Go me let!” The Blond yelled.

The blue haired girl smiles at her gently. “We’re getting you out of here” She said. The blond girl blinks in shock. No one has ever said that before. Is there really more out there? Yes… she can feel it… like a distant memory…

“She looks sort of familiar, do you think she could be old Mewman royalty?” The bird man asks. “Nah, she doesn’t have any cheek marks” The blue haired woman said shrugging.

Suddenly there are foot steps down the hall way. Coming down the hallway is a group of men in dark red armor. They have dragon face masks, shoulder pad with blades extending off to the sides by 7 inches.

“Oh crap! I gotta send you somewhere were they won’t find you!” The blue haired girl said quickly. Before the Blond could reply the blue haired girl opens a blue portal and shoves the blond into the portal...

-&&&Earth – Emerarudo Forest&&&-

The night sky with it’s full moon shines bright as crickets chirp peacefully though out the forest before a blue portal opens, causing an abrupt silence. A mutant blond girl falls out of the portal, yelping in surprise. She jumps up in time to see the portal close. She looks around in Shock. She was free… She was finally free! She jumps up and down cheering with joy only to hear a loud roar from behind her. She whips around to see a large brown bear growling at her.

“….Puppy?” She asks curiously. The bear roars and charges at her. The blond yelps and raises her arms. The crystals in her palms glow an eerie purple before shooting out two dark purple blasts at the bear, hitting it and knocking it back into a tree, knocking it out cold. The blond pants heavily, staring in shock. She then turns and runs away.

She runs So fast that she doesn’t see where she is going. She trips over a loose root and falls down a slope, yelping and screaming

-&&&15 minutes later - Daiz Household – Trans-Seattle outskirts&&&-

A 14-year-old boy with black hair and a black jacket, with リバティー、家族、名誉 going down the back of it, named Marco is relaxing on the couch watching TV with his Manchester Terrier named Laser. It was 9:50PM and his parents were away getting groceries. On the walls of the living room pictures of famous Japanese emperors and the Japanese empire.

Suddenly there is a loud bang. Both Marco and Laser shoot their heads up, both looking towards the font door. Marco quickly pulls out his stun pistol. “What the heck was that?” Marco whispered as he get’s up and walks over to the door, Laser following close behind.

Marco quickly opens the door and points his stun pistol at whoever or whatever made the noise. “Who’s there?! Stay back! I know karate!” Marco yelled. Laser runs out barking

A girl with messy blond hair, six arms, large red horns and a tail looks up quickly, alarmed, from the Knocked over trash can, an old apple core in her mouth. She is covered in dirt and she has twigs in her hair. “What the heck?!” Marco yells, staring in shock and almost dropping his stun pistol.

The girl drops the apple core out of her mouth and hisses at him with a Frightened look on her face. Marco blinks in surprise. Seeing her fear, he calms down a bit and lowers his stun pistol. “Hey… Calm down… It’s okay, I’m not going to hurt you… Whatever you are… You just surprised me is all…” Marco said cautiously, putting his stun gun in his pocket and raising his hands up midway.

The Blond, recognizing this hand gesture calms down as well. Laser, see both the girl and his master calm down, decides to walk over to start and sniffs her, which causes her to jump back a bit but decides to let him sniff, not without still being Cautious. Laser, now Figuring she’s not a threat, walks back over to his master.

Marco chuckles a bit and takes her hand. He smiles at her gently, forcing himself to stay calm. “Hey, you look prettied messed up there, come inside and we can get you clean” Marco said before hearing a loud rumble from the girl. “And get you something to eat…” Marco Quickly added.

The girl blinks in confusion as she is pulled inside. After a surprisingly difficult and tedious bath the girl is sitting at a table, curiously looking around the room and at all the Japanese statues and paintings, with very childlike curiosity and wonder. Laser is laying on his back on the couch, occasionally twitching and making growling sounds. The girl looks over giggles slightly at the dog.

Marco walks over smiling with a plate of nachos and sits them in font of her. She stares at them with awe and wonder. “TRAINGLE FOOD!” She yelled before munching down on them…. With very, very poor table manners. Marco looks on with disgust, almost throwing up.
He may not have as much of a requirement for table manners as the Japanese do, but he wasn’t that

far off. She is done in a matter of minutes. She lets out a loud burp, almost causing Marco to puke again. She looks around the room excitedly. “MORE MORE MORE!” She demanded.

Marco chuckles nervously. “I think that’s enough for now” He said. The girl pouts. “But me like!” She wined. Marco chuckles a bit at her broken English and rolls his eyes. “So… Where are you from?” Marco asks.

Hearing this the girl’s mood sours. “F-From… V-Ver-Very B-Bad place…” She whimpered as she looks down at the table. Marco frowns. “Oh… I see… Sorry, I didn’t mean to upset you…” Marco said. ‘She must be from some sort of lab from the Atlantic State of America… I heard they do some pretty messed up stuff there’ Marco thought to himself

“It okay… Me not want to think it” The girl said sadly. Marco blinks and coughs. “Anyways… uh… Why did you come here?” Marco asks curiously. She looks back up at him slightly. “S-Some p-people f-freed me… they push me though portal and I fell into woods near here… then me found you” The girl said. Marco blinks in surprise. ‘Portal? She must mean some kind of window or vehicle… there’s no way the A.S.A or anyone else has made portal or portal like technology… right?” Marco thought himself.

While he was in thought the girl hugs him tightly. He jumps slightly in surprise and looks at her. “Me thank you very much… this most kind thing ever happen to me…” She said with tears in her eyes. Marco smiles and hugs her back. “Your welcome…. My name is Marco, What’s your name?” Marco asks her.

She smiles at him. “S-Star… Star butterfly…” She said, as if recalling from a very distant memory. “It’s nice to meet you, Star” Marco said happily. “Nice to meet you too, Marco” She said, red hearts appearing on her cheeks.

-&&&Mewni – Tallest Tower&&&-

A dark figure looks out from a large 10-foot-tall window from her chair, watching over her metropolis, A bright full moon shining brightly overhead. The wallpaper is a dark red, along with almost everything in the room, the curtains, chairs and table cloths. The room has an almost Victorian look to it. A 6-foot-tall man in silver armor with a lance walks into the room. His armor obscures all his features. “My lady, I have some urgent news for you.” The man said

“What is it Captain Spine Breaker?” The figure asks slivery voice. “Project-Incendium Sidus, our prized subject, has escaped…” Spine breaker says in a serious tone

“WHAT?!” The figure yells, spinning around from her chair and standing up, revealing a Woman With long, curvy dark red hair and green eyes. Her figure was that of an hourglass and she was wearing a red Victorian dress that went down to her ankles.

“How did this happen?!” The woman yelled. “3 members of one of the resistance groups snuck in somehow sort after most of our guard left for the war effort and took out our anti-dimensional rift crystal. They then snuck into the lab, broke out our prized subjected and Sent her though a Portal… but our guards managed to capture one of the intruders.”

He then snaps his fingers. Two guards bring a blue haired girl, her hands tied together. “Let me go! I Swear to the stump if you don’t let me go you’ll all freeze in the next winter!” The blue haired girl yelled. The woman snickers, amused by this. “Look who it is, Kelly the warrior… Such a shame that such talent had to go to waste fighting our glorious effort.” The woman said smirking.
“Shut up you warmonger! Your reign will end!” Kelly yelled as she kicked and screamed. The woman chuckles. “Maybe it will, maybe it won’t.” She said. She then looks at to the two guards. “Take her to the refitting Chamber… Make her scream… Then take her to the labs… Our bio-war scientists will make good use of her… Also, Spine breaker promote those two guards, they did a good job capturing that intruder” The Woman said. The guards smirk and bow before heading out of the room.

“WHAT?! NO NO NO! LET ME GO! DON’T YOU DARE!” Kelly yelled, struggling even harder but to no avail. The doors close behind the guards as they exit the room. The woman’s expression then turns more serious. She turns to Captain Spine Breaker. “Find Project-Incendium Sidus and bring her back as soon as possible, Don’t waste any time” The woman said in a demanding tone. Spine Breaker nods before walking out of the room.

The woman sighs and turns back to the Window. “This isn’t good… Who knows what she… no that monster, could do… there is no telling what she is capable of at this point, A shame that at the very lest we didn’t get to test the fullest of her capabilities… What have I unleashed upon the multiverse?” The woman asks herself in dread…
Star vs the forces of Mewni Chapter 1: The Escape
Hello there! This is my first story that I've published on this site and don't expect it to be the best of stories. All Constructive criticism is welcome(As long as it's actual CONSTRUCTIVE critism). Tell me what you think in the comments and let me know if there are any mistakes or anything I need to change. Thanks for reading!
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